Friday 15 April 2016

critical investigation

"I don't know about you but I can't shoot a gun… I've never even tried. To be honest… I wouldn't trust any of those guys to wash my clothes."[1] 
To what extent does the representation of women in The Walking Dead challenge traditional gender stereotypes?
Over the years there have been many traditional roles of women in TV shows. Now that we are living in a modern society some TV shows and some parts of shows still show the traditional roles of women. For example, The Walking Dead[2] have been showing these roles in since the show first aired in 2010. The Walking Dead is a TV show that airs every Monday at 9pm on FOX TV[3]. The story is about a zombie apocalypse and is focused on a group of survivors that have to go through many different tasks and situations in order to survive in this post-apocalyptic world. There are traditional male and female roles involved that point towards the way society has not really changed over the past few years and still clings to tradition. Alongside The Walking Dead I will be making sure that I refer to two other texts. They will be The Sarah Connor Chronicles and Desperate Housewives. These are texts that I want to be able to explore and use for and against the question.
Feminism has a big part to play. Feminists believe that both women and men should be equal in society. For example “Some feminists believe that all genders should always be treated in exactly the same way. They think that people should not think that a person's gender is important.”[4] This means women getting paid the same as men, women being allowed to go out and not have to stay at home and be a housewife or have a male take on that role. A feminist wants to be treated the same as men so getting paid the same and having rights that should be equal etc. There are different types of feminists. For example, liberal, radical, Marxists and socialist, cultural and eco feminists.[5] You can have women that go extreme with being feminism and believe that they should only wear clothes made by women because they feel that men have power over them, and you get feminist that aren’t as extreme and believe that they should get the same amount of maternity leave like men should etc. So, there are different types. Even though it is acting feminists can still say and show what they feel is right about the situations and what is being aired on TV shows. For example, a quote by Dr. Cullins that supports this is “They all have expectations for the way women and men, girls and boys, should dress, behave, and look[6]”. This means that society and has expectations and beliefs that women and men should act and be a certain way. They want to become more modern and get rid of the traditional roles that have stuck by them for many, many years. Years ago women weren’t allowed to have a job or go out with friends. They would have to stay at home take care of children, feed the family. This was a role of a traditional housewife. Women now want to get be more independent and not have this role. Years ago teenagers had to get married at a young age and automatically have a family because of the way they were brought up and the way society told them how to act. This would make it wrong for them to want to study and make a career for themselves. Over the years the role has changed where you can get married at 40 years old and it will be ok. Society has adapted and it’s become natural for women to get married when they are older and not have children like they would have had to 50 years ago.

Over the couple of years the role of a “typical woman” or “typical housewife” has changed. For example, “The young woman is a supporter, someone who can stay home and help with household tasks while the men earn income and develop their education.[7] Women aren’t seen in that way as much as society itself has changed and has become used to the fact that women are developing more and more. Women aren’t seen as this as they can get a job and work and not have a family or a partner and this will be seen as a good as many women want to be like this. If a women sees a another woman earning a double amount of money that they do, not have a family or anything to tie them down or have children and can afford to go on holiday every year-they will be jealous because they will envy this role as that women is seen as strong and independent as they don’t need a male figure to rely on. They can do it for themselves. This is the role that Michonne in The Walking Dead shows. She can do things for herself and defend herself. This is something that women hope to be and they watch this. In some cases women are still showing that traditional stereotype but not as much. For example, in TV show The Sarah Connor chronicles, Sarah is shown as a strong young mum who fights off a female robot which is seen in a sexual way. Feminists don’t want to be seen in that way. They want to be shown as equal women who don’t depend on anyone and work for themselves, who fight and argue without anyone’s help. But why is still hard to show this?
However, Michonne in The Walking Dead isn’t seen in a sexual way. This could be by the way she’s dressed or how she acts. Because she acts masculine this may not appeal to the male audience. Laura Mulvey[8] believes that films and advertisement that show women are there to please the male audience. This is because they could be shown in a sexual way or that the company uses an attractive woman because they know that if they an attractive women they will get more views or the male audience will buy whatever the women is on. For example, John Berger (1972)[9] studied the European nudes and he found out that women are often shown in front of a mirror and painted. This could because they want to show how they look and what they could change on their body to be more attractive. Also, Berger said that “They reassure men of their sexual power and at the same moment deny any sexuality of women other than the male construction. They are evidence of gendered difference. Because any effort to replace the women in these images with a man violates ‘the assumptions of the likely viewer.”

We will be focusing on The Walking Dead a great TV show that presents females as independent and are able to handle themselves. This TV show does show some hints of stereotypes with the women in the show but it also contradicts itself by showing the non traditional side which is the part that should be shown more in TV shows and films. The women in this show are shown as strong, independent women who are defending themselves everyday from evil people and the zombies that they have to fight. The men are also taking care of themselves. Women aren’t associated with fighting or have anything to do with it. Women normally associate aggressive behaviour with men.  Women in The Walking Dead aren’t like this and they can handle seeing blood and gore, they can handle getting a few bruises or getting a wound. These are women that other women may see and find inspiring as they may want to be able to not let that tradition define who they are.
The way that Michonne dresses is simple and plain-she doesn’t wear dresses or carry handbags as she needs to carry weapons to defend herself. They don’t have luxuries like that for them to wear and they wouldn’t set it like that as they need it to be realistic. They can’t show a woman in a dress fighting a zombie as it doesn’t work. The setting in the show is always dull and has a scary atmosphere about it. Women don’t carry weapons around with them but because she needs to kill zombies she needs to carry it so that she can survive. Michonne and Carol have to be like this. They have to show that they can survive and that they don’t get upset when someone close by dies because they are used to it now. Normally women would be sensitive and emotional when seeing things like this happen but when put in difficult situations you have to be tough and that’s hard for women as in general they are emotional. “Many women believe that they can do what they want, when they want and how they want. You can have many different types of women like aggressive, sad, happy, seductive, and manipulative but a majority of them aren’t what they used to be or what they are[10]”.This shows that they can be how they want to do what they want without anyone judging them. You get different types of women that take things differently but a majority of them are becoming more masculine in the roles they take one and what and how they act. Everything is changing.

For example, at one point the women will be fighting and killing then in the next episode they will be caring for children and babies and providing for the friends and family around which means that they would be cooking for everyone. This shows that women can show their traditional stereotypes but it would be good if they showed the other side to it as well so that it shows that women shouldn’t be underestimated by what they do and how they do certain things. It’s good that women can show their natural maternal traits but when they don’t want to be portrayed in that way then it’s hard to show that as many roles are dominated by men. Even men are showing their maternal side in TWD (The walking dead) when they have to care for the children or cook. So, it’s not just women that has to do these things-men can also do it. Therefore, domestic work is not just restricted to women but also to men.
This is difficult for people to understand as still to this day they will still not let women do a certain role because “it’s a man’s job” or won’t let women play the strong female character as much in films. This does still happen. Most films nowadays and TV shows do let women be the protagonist but they still have a slightly traditional role of being a sex object and damsel in distress in between. You won’t often see woman play a normal aggressive, masculine role as they think they can’t do it or that it will upset other females because they are shown to that extent. For example, “These women engaged in masculine types of violence (fought against males and strangers most of the time, often used weapons and caused high levels of destruction), yet retained feminine stereotypes due to their submissive role and romantic involvement with the dominant male hero character.[11] This shows that women will still have to show their feminine side. For example, they could be killing someone but be seen as a sex object or be a sidekick for a male actor etc. They want to be able to show much a wider role that they can do rather than being someone’s sidekick and have a bigger role. It’s a fact that men get a job more quickly than women and women don’t get the bigger role in movies because it wouldn’t seem right for that role to be played by a woman. This is why there are feminists around as they believe that it should be equal the way the men and women are treated. These are roles that are in the action genre and thriller roles. They think because it’s a female they can’t fight or be aggressive. The roles that women have will always stick on them.

Some females are still traditional themselves they believe that they should be housewives or only stay in the kitchen and be known for it. For example when women are being shown in a tough way they will still sometimes be in the background, rather than the limelight. For example they will have a strong male character then a sidekick which would normally be a woman and this happens in TV and in films. “Despite an increase in tough and even violent female characters in American films, women continue to be shown as sidekicks to more dominant male heroes and they are also frequently involved in a romantic relationship with them.[12]” This shows that women still don’t get the main part they would like to play and be stuck with the part that still portrays them as weak and sensitive females.
When women are being shown in this way then it’s harder for people to process that times have changed and women can be aggressive and rude or be violent just like men can be. Women should be allowed to play the roles that a man can. Why can’t they? Because there not supposed to? It’s not a good thing for this to keep happening as i said times have changed and they should be able to do whatever role they want and feel comfortable with. For example, “You can have many different types of women like aggressive, sad, happy, seductive; manipulative-but a majority of them aren’t what they used to be or what they are “supposed” to be like 30 years ago or less[13].” This is true as many women can be like this and do think like this.

Sarah Connor is a good representation of what women can do what they want, when they and how they want and they can show this in the TV industry. Sarah Connor is a well-known TV show that is part of the terminator played by Arnold Schwarzenegger. You can see that they changed the role to women as they thought that women would be right to play this role-and they were. This show was successful, and it showed other women how women can be or what they can do. For example, the way Sarah fought or knew how to do certain things was empowering to some women. This showed that she wasn’t acting like a damsel in distress (Propp)[14] like a lot of people would expect from women to be because of the way society portrays and stereotypes females. The Sarah Connor Chronicles did show and spark many problems as many people didn’t believe that women should condone violence. The other character that was played by a woman who was the robot was not an enemy but a friend and she was shown as a sex object due to the revealing and tight clothes (Mulvey)[15] that she was wearing and the way that she represented herself. Even though, she was a good actor and was supposed to be seen in an aggressive way she wasn’t as many people couldn’t see pass the sexual object phase that she had. Feminists believe that women shouldn’t be seen as sexual objects and seen as equals and be seen in good ways.   

However, in TV show ‘Desperate Housewives’[16] Bree Van De Kamp is shown as a sexual object and is a feisty character. She is known for getting her way through poisoning people, being aggressive towards male characters etc. Even though this isn’t a TV show that relates to action packed programmes like TWD and Sarah Connor chronicles[17], it still makes sense to use it as it’s something that supports my question that females are showing that they can be non-traditional and do what they want. Bree has been a character that has shown her funny side and serious side-meaning that if something went wrong she would make sure that she fixed the problem with killing or hurting them. Bree shows her power through the clothes she wears as they are seductive and she uses her sexuality to get her way. Whereas Michonne and Sarah use their mind and strength. This shows that Bree knows what men and women want and goes and does it. Bree knows she is a sex object for men and uses that to her advantage to make the opposite sex weaker and tries to hurt them like that rather than using her strength. Being sexy and older is all she has. Michonne, Sarah and Bree all have something in common and that’s that they are women and that they share traits that aren’t a traditional role that women take one. You don’t see women fighting in road or women killing other people as much because it’s not in their nature. But now that society are allowing films and TV shows to allow for people to watch what they can do-opens the frame of mind that women can be like this and that they should feel underestimated in what they do. For example, if a women was a playing a role of a cheerleader and she needs to act unintelligent-a lot of people are going to think that because she isn’t smart she can’t do anything which isn’t true.

In conclusion, the walking dead has challenged the traditional stereotypes by the way that the females have to act in order for their role to be good. The walking dead women do sometimes show their sensitive side but because of the role that they are playing they need to stay fit and healthy and fight a majority of the time and be strong minded. Women are seen as seen as weak minded sensitive and sex objects. TWD doesn’t show these things. If women are seen as a sex object in TWD its not by the way she dresses or how she walks it’s how they are and what they act like. You don’t need to be women to cook, clean and look after kids. Men can do the same and the walking dead does show that. Many TV shows and films need to show women in the best of their ability of what they can do and not keep them in the same role that they are used to-this could be a damsel in distress or a sidekick etc. Women have a lot more to show than the role that get given and this shown in The Walking Dead.

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[2] The Walking dead
[3] FOX TV
[4] Wikipedia
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[6] Dr. Cullins (2014)
[7]  Discrimination of Women (2015)

[8] Tekanji (August 2007)
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Tuesday 23 February 2016

LR

  1. Type up your teacher comments from your first draft.
WWW: you have the beginnings of an argument here in terms of analysing a text that offers a positive representation of women. However, this just isn't up to A2 standard for the following reasons.

EBI: Research and bibliography is level 1 at best. Its also incomplete-you put two good quotes from Heidelberg on page 3 of the essay but this doesn't appear in the bibliography. Its simple, if you want a higher grade you need to do a lot of research.
Written English-you fail to use capital letters in an A2 essay-thats shocking.
When you write about media texts, there is no actual textual. you dont use any media terminology or film language etc.
similarly, no media theory. What have you been learning for the past 2 years?
You need much mire on feminism, wider context, influence on audience and impact on society etc.
you have ALOT of work to do if you want to get a c+ grade.


  1. Write what mark/grade you are aiming for in your second draft.
I want to at least be able to get over 25 to 30 marks. I want to be able to be on a solid C grade.


  1. Write a numbered list of five things you will do or change for your second draft that will help you get there. Be specific and explain in detail.
  • I will need to research more about feminism
  • Read more articles and read more books about what i am writing about.
  • I will need add alot of theories and research
  • I will need to make sure that i include CLAMPS and Mise-en-scene etc.
  • I will need to widen my vocab

Friday 5 February 2016

Research and planning

1) Confirm your production brief. You write this yourself but it's absolutely crucial this is clear, appropriate and achievable. You should have done this already - the original blogpost was here - but it may have changed as a result of your preliminary exercise.

I will be showing a range of things in my video. It will be about a boy and a girl who are going out and then show how they had a fight and she is mental and then does some psychological things to him like beats him up, ties him up for days etc. I want to be able to show how the woman is being controlling, manipulative etc instead of the stereotype it being a man doing it.This will show how difference in the opening scene as people assume its always the guy acting like that.


2) Research: notes on at least THREE similar texts to the one you are creating. What are the key conventions? What can you learn/borrow from the examples you have looked at?

The fall is one of the texts I will be researching seeing. I will also be researching the way that X files uses some things will be good. X files is more sci-fi but as i am showing a psychological thing it should be good to use some elements from it.


3) Project schedule: when will you film and edit this production?

I want to be able to film it next week and start doing some things like getting my props and costume and actors together. I will be able to get the work done and then once i have finished filming i can then edit. I should be done filming within 3 weeks.  I want top be able to film during the holidays too.


4) Script - see the BBC Writers' Room for advice/script formatting. If you're making a music video, you'll want to write a treatment instead. This is an example treatment that I provided for GCSE Media students studying this topic.

Done-


5) Storyboard - sheets available in DF07 or you can use this AQA storyboard sheet.
Done-

6) Shot list - use Microsoft Word or a template like this to help you.
Done-

7) Mise-en-scene: casting details, location scouting with photographs, props, costume and make-up, lighting.

Actors-There is going to my friend Tara-she will bring two other boys with her-The main boy *jack* wioll be the most important as he has a big role and then we can find someone to pretend to be eating and choking in the end.

Location-The location will be in a toilet for the beginning scene- Then when he’s tied up that will be either in a garage or an abounded warehouse. There will need to be some space. Or instead she can be keeping him in the room at the back of her house.

Props-there will be a weapon involved-For example, a large knife, a gardening weapon like an axe or a spade. Fake blood and some bruising

Costume-*Amy* will be in all black weather its jeans and a black top or a black dress and she will have to wear black heels. *Jack* will be in a white shirt or black shirt and jeans. He will be casual as we are showing how powerful a female can be. This means she will have to look fierce and black is a colour that relates to death.

Make-up- *Amy* will have to wear some makeup as she will be shown as a hard character again and she will have to look pretty etc. Jack won’t need any makeup maybe some fake bruises and fake blood but that’s all.


Lighting- As this is going to be shot in daylight-we are going to need the natural light of the sun. We want it to look a bit gloomy so if it decides to rain then that’s good-it needs to be dull. There will be some artificial lighting where when they are showing the scene where they are angry and shouting-we will need to see what is going on.




















script

Script

*She looking in the mirror and staying in the bathroom at this time*
Jack- She was a beautiful, smart, funny, normal girl. She would make me laugh all the time. She was perfect….
Until something changed.

Blank screen

*noise of her walking with her heels on*
Blank screen
*The weeknd-the hills starts from shot 13-18*
Blank screen
From shot 21 dialogue-
Amy- “You have been really, really bad to me. I didn’t like how you treated me. Always keeping me second best…”
Jack-“I didn’t I promise you were always MY number one!!”

Amy-“NO, NO, NO!!! DONT LIE TO ME!!”
Jack-“what do you mean?”
Amy-“what do I mean? *laughs hysterically*” “WHAT DO I MEAN? Are you stupid! I always gave you everything-until you wanted to be with your friends more and be with your family.”
Jack- “They had to be a part of my life too. They are my family and friends.”
Amy-“wasn’t I enough?”
Jack-“You were. But they are  family I had to see them sometimes. I love them, I LOVE you…”
Amy-“shut up, shut up SHUTUP!!! I’ve had enough of you talking I thought you would have try to prove yourself to me.”
*Tries to put duct tape around his mouth again*
Jack-“No no, I can prove myself-I promise”
Amy- “How?”
Jack-“Untie me and I can prove it to you.”
Amy-“No! You will just run away like the others did! I have to teach you a lesson!”
Jack-“what do you mean “teach me a lesson”?
Amy *laughs*
Jack- “WHAT DO YOU MEAN!??”
Amy-“You never understood did you?”

Jack- “Understand what?”
Amy- *laughs*
Jack- “THAT’S IT UNTIE ME YOU CRAZY BITCH!”
Amy-“Don’t call me that!”
Jack- crazy Bi…. Amy puts duct tape around mouth
Amy- “That’s better now I won’t have to hear you cry when I kill you..
Jack-tries to breath
Amy *She stabs him in the back*

Blank screen

*sits at a table*
Boy- Yes loves a good brekkie!!
Amy-Yes I know you do..
Boy-eats really fast as he’s hungry (he’s happy) a minute later realises something is wrong and choking on his food

Amy *smiles at the camera*



shot list

Shot no:
Shot type
Details of shot
Timing
1
Medium shot
Of her looking at herself in the mirror
3 seconds
2
Close up
Washing blood off her hands
3 seconds
3
Medium shot
Medium shot of her staring in the mirror so you can see the reflection
3 seconds
4
Blank
Black screen
2 seconds
5
Medium shot
Of her black heels
2 seconds
6
Medium shot
Walking  in her heels and a weapon that she’s holding
4 seconds
7
Long shot
Of her walking towards her boyfriend
4 seconds
8
Long shot
Keep seeing her walk towards him-hes tied up in a chair
4 seconds
9
Close up
Of the boyfriend
2 seconds
10
Medium shot
Of those two looking at each other
2 seconds
11
Medium close up
Seeing her rip the duck tape off his mouth
4 seconds
12
Blank
Black screen
2 seconds
13
Long/medium shot
Of them arguing
5 seconds
14
Long/medium shot
Arguing and she’s  hitting him
5 seconds
15
Medium shot
She pushes him onto the floor
5 seconds
16
close up
Of her getting the hard item and hit on he back of the head
4 seconds
17
Close up
Her face is in shock as he’s not moving
2 seconds
18
Close up
She then smirks at the camera
3 seconds
19
Blank
Black screen (goes back to the part when he’s tied up in a chair)
2 seconds
20
Close up
Of the boy and girl making eye contact together
3 seconds
21
Medium shot
Girl walking around the boy
4 seconds
22
Medium shot
Him trying to calm her down
10 seconds
23
Medium shot
Her laughing and talking to him
10 seconds
24
Medium shot
Those two talking more
5 seconds
25
Medium shot
Tries to put the duct tape around his mouth
5 seconds
26
Long shot
Him talking to her trying to convince her to be better
10 seconds
27
Medium shot
Puts duct tape around his mouth
4 seconds
28
Medium shot
She’s behind him and says something to him and kills him
4 seconds
29
blank
Black screen
2 seconds
30
Long shot
She finds another boy and sits at the table with him-they talk
5 seconds
31
Medium close up
He coughs whilst eating
3 seconds
32
Close up
Of her smiling 
3 seconds
33
Blank
Black screen
end